' Movement In Black Comments

this is epic as so many of your thosands of works are over the past decade.

magnificent depiction of what it must be like to live in blindness. frank you are the master!

The Light illuminate through the epoch of darkness, great poem.

I love the vividness of this remarkable poem, I feel the journey, it's me standing there setting up shelves in a way that I would understand, it's me in the blackness finding my way around and I feel perhaps one day, all will come together and who knows maybe I'll see that oceanfront sunset...Love this very sensitive poem.....

Wonderful prose poem. A deep glimpse into the sightless world. Very touching and well written. Please read my poem, the Ball Woman

A serious and seriously wrought poem. [Refinements could make it also an important poem.]

FJR, As ever, you are superb in imaginative sympathy. Those with lamps and bulbs Live in the darkness of soul Blind to the realm of spirit They ever miss life's goal CP

This goes on my favorites list. You gave me a glimpse into a world i never gave a thought to. Beautifully written and deeply touching. Thank you for sharing.

Most interesting viewpoint on how it must be to be blind, one cannot imagine it but I like how you bring to our mind the fact that the other senses are honed just higher and that they give way to a better more generous mind because of it. Sensitively written. HG: -) xx