Saturday, November 26, 2016

Move On (Senryu) Comments

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moribund gargoyle
bashed around by many storms ~~
it's time to retire
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Kelly Kurt 05 December 2016

Are you talking about me? : -)

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Gil Highlander 27 November 2016

Clever Govind. I like the gargoyle imagery against retiring early.

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Stephen Park 27 November 2016

Love the juxtaposition in this poem. I see many hidden meanings here.

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