Move On (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Move On (Senryu)



moribund gargoyle
bashed around by many storms ~~
it's time to retire

© 2016

Saturday, November 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 05 December 2016

Are you talking about me? : -)

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Gil Highlander 27 November 2016

Clever Govind. I like the gargoyle imagery against retiring early.

45 17 Reply
Stephen Park 27 November 2016

Love the juxtaposition in this poem. I see many hidden meanings here.

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