Saturday, February 7, 2009

Move On Comments

Rating: 5.0

Since you left me
It’s been raining for so long
Why don’t you tell me?
What did I do wrong?
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John Mccudden
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Miriam Maia Padua 13 February 2009

a very inspiring piece....words shared are very touching... optimistic towards pain of love...... i love the lines from the title down to the end a great piece for anybody declining to move on...

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Fiona Davidson 09 February 2009

Beautiful write with hope running through it John thank you for sharing it...Fi 10+

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Jim Norausky 09 February 2009

I really like the way you weave sunshine and rain with your broken relationship and apparent hope for reconciliation. Well done. Jim

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