Tuesday, March 20, 2018

Move, Move And Move Comments

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In front of your eyes
all the water of the world started evaporating
But sun did not knew that-
you are a spectator of this process.
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manaswini dash
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Jolly S Lee 05 December 2018

Beautiful lines..first 10 lines marvellous .

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Manaswini Dash 06 December 2018

My heartiest thanks.

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Rajnish Manga 20 March 2018

Challenges met in the right spirit will bring the desired results- No Less. So move on. Moving ahead step by step like this is nothing but life.

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Manaswini Dash 20 March 2018

Thanks Rajnish for your comment. Comments of readers is essential for refinement of writing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 March 2018

Ascending is sure to be followed by descending. A lengthy lament has also an end followed by a long trail of memory. Moving ahead step by step like this is nothing but life... a very fine poem.. so many memories pictured so well. it is a pleasure to read you. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Manaswini Dash 20 March 2018

Thanks Tony. i am really happy that you liked my poem. Thanks a lot.

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