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well penned poem here!

i been through this same thing a few years ago so i really understand, it's good that you notice that you didnt need to go through that again, so another chance wasnt so.

I love it.. I can relate to it.. Thank you for letting me read it.. your poem was magnificiant

Some of the painful parts of growing. It's called maturity, so better luck next time. Well expressed.

This petty bickering is normal in love................Well Penned............

this is nice, very nice indeed. So move on, mate...! 0+

Everything I said in Captured Hearts can be easily applied on this one as well.

ok, that's a good lesson for her...but always remember, .there is a saying, ''love is sweeter in second time around''..nice poem.. naizz

another beautiful poem flew so softly

Last line sums it up well. NEW CHAPTER TIME

sensitive...sentimental...good love poem quarelling type...thanks, Tanvi...10

you seem to have a flair for love poems..sensitive thoughts and intense emotions

another really good poem 10+++

poetic touches but misconceived love. CP

Great poem: D

Well, this wasn't a bad poem, tanvi, and had it's charming moments in it. It was clearly written in the enthusiasm of youth and a not so successful romance. Of course, to the young, a day seems like forever, and the full appreciation of that word will not be realized for several years yet. Still, you have a talent for expression, which I am certain will only improve as your get older and gain more experience in life and in writing. Good luck. Carl.

Always sniff around the primate of this spent love, knowing what smells good in the market and that which always should be buried.for it rides the back of a wingless fly..while the butterfly always has butter for rolls... :) ...lol...remember you always git wut u ever, never has wanted...

love intense seems to be shadowed by its reeks, may resurrects again in time and spece yet unknown, quite passionate write, it flows ingenious from heart, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing