Thursday, June 22, 2006

Mouse Trap Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my quiet cozy little house
I seem to have inherited a mouse
the small guy says hi everyday
But I think I want him out the way
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David Darbyshire
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Mary Nagy 16 July 2006

Well, you're alot nice than me Dave! I have to admit I like the sound of that SNAP! Gosh that sounds evil doesn't it? ? But, I like to know I don't have to be afraid anymore. :) Cute poem Dave. Sincerely, Mary

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Francesca Johnson 23 June 2006

A mouse? Cheese? Very apt for Amsterdam. And like the others, I am glad you went for the humane version of a mouse-trap, Dave. Nice little friendly poem, this. Love, Fran the Fan xx

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Dee Daffodil 23 June 2006

A really cute poem Dave! ! What...you don't share your cookies? ? Hugs, Dee

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Sweet, funny, well-written piece, AND good on you for getting the catch-and-release not the barbaric swing-catch-leave-to-die-in-agony-for-hours kind!

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