Tuesday, March 30, 2021

Mouse And Monkey. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Said the Mouse to the Monkey,
You're gracious, you are funky!
Over the trees and on the land,
You go out freely and eat what you want!
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M. Asim Nehal
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Captain Cur 02 April 2021

Mouse had enough adventure for one day! Great write! True, we concentrate on our own struggles, and believe others have had a free ride, like mouse. But Lion charged a fee!

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RH 31 March 2021

A very meaningful and insightful poetry. Very well penned. I have no words to admire the metaphorical journey into the world of reality.

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Shreya Hacks 31 March 2021

Creative poem.

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Suzon Albert 31 March 2021

Yes how often we do this.......every rose has a thorns

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Ricky Manhatten 31 March 2021

Grass looks always green on the other side...Nice lesson learned.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 31 March 2021

A story with some purpose. Well done.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 March 2021

Asim ji, what a lovely tale of a mouse and monkey. A good message and a lesson learnt. Enjoyed reading this story poem. Surely 5 stars

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Poetic Sky 30 March 2021

A story with a purpose.

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M. Asim Nehal

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