Tuesday, November 14, 2006

Mourning Snow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone I stood, with the darkness creeping,
Easily dispersing the light to form stars.
So many thoughts ticking through my mind,
My heart lim-ps along like a bro-ken me-tro-nome,
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Lipstick Casanova
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Melvina Germain 18 December 2006

Wonderful poem Lipstick, I especially like the last line, 'for the marriage between life and death' fabulous line. I agree with the two previous comments from Helen and Doc. Excellent piece of work Lipstick.--Melvina

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Original Unknown Girl 15 November 2006

what a haunting read Lipstick! Much poignancy in that there pen today my friend! A wonderful write and worthy of a ten, I concur wholeheartedly with Doc here... HG: -) xx

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