The shadow emerging from the morning mist
Raises inside of me a storm
Of anger and sadness
That swirls in me like a tornado
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Oh, is it powerful! I love your word choice and the form is interesting. It's dark, but lovely. Xs and Os
Gods, this is good... Driving, fervent, insistent... It grabs the attention and holds until the final, dying chord has played. Excellent writing on display here. Warmest Regards, Eliza Stine