Thursday, January 17, 2013

Mourning Has Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today is the morning,
You were not my first thought,
I still lie here motionless,
But I'm not feeling distraught.
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Ruby Honeytip
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Joshua Fegley 23 February 2013

I like it. Good poem Honeytip.

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Stevie Taite 31 January 2013

Beautiful and full Of positive energy And wonderful like you. Your poetry sings to me. X x x I love and look forward to the smile I get from the last line. Ties it all together so well. X x x x

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Stevie Taite 31 January 2013

Beautiful and full Of positive energy And wonderful like you. Your poetry sings to me. X x x I love and look forward to the smile I get from the last line. Ties it all together so well. X x x x

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Titi Dale 21 January 2013

Wow, and moving on has brought many of us somewhere :) a great write! Simply amazing!

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Valerie Dohren 20 January 2013

A lovely poem Ruby, very tender.

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Lyn Paul 19 January 2013

What strength you have. Great title too.

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Joseph Anderson 18 January 2013

Sad, but maybe not. You seem to have the handle on this. Gollee, what a meaningful title, enough imagery here for the whole story

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