Thursday, November 23, 2017

Mourning Flies Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some held a mass at her grave-
Petals strewn on the mild lave.
Granite-rose a gray façade,
Interred within where she strode,
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Aria Ligi
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 24 December 2017

A poem reflecting the true spirits of a genuine friendship from hearty friend. Congrats for being the member's PoD.

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Christina Simmons: 24 December 2017

I sense quite a lot of anger coming from this poem. Was the friend taken away too soon? Congratulation for being poet of the day. Thank you for sharing. And bringing to the light.

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James Mclain 24 December 2017

Aria, Congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Aria Ligi 24 December 2017

James, thank you so much. I appreciate all your support.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 December 2017

Great ink for a departed soul. Emotionally powerful. Congrats for being poem of the day.10++++

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Rajnish Manga 24 December 2017

This is an emotional portrayal of a dear friend's final parting. Thanks a lot, Dear Aria.

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Tom Allport 24 December 2017

a sad and sorrowful poem about the death of a friend who now is at peace? ............well written Aria

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 December 2017

A great tribute to a great soul with poignant and touching words...........deserves P.O.D........congratulation for this great composition..............thanks for sharing

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2017

Life and death! ! With sorrowful byes! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 December 2017

Aria, such a brilliant and heartwarming poem worthy of a perfect score of 10. Congrats for being chosen+++

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Muzahidul Reza 24 December 2017

Well penned and exact tribute to someone no more in the earth, liked it, Congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us

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paulos Ioannou 03 December 2017

so sad.. thanks for sharing

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Miles Ciletti 26 November 2017

A wonderfully written poem speaking on how fragile life can be from a perspective of death. It definitely raises the old saying that death is hardest on the living. Well done!

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Jim Boydston 25 November 2017

This is a excellent conveyance of the mixed feelings surrounding death.

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Dominic M.Windram 23 November 2017

An excellent, thought provoking addition to the elegiac tradition!

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Dominic M Windram 23 November 2017

An excellent, thought provoking new edition to the eiegiac tradition!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 November 2017

Such a heartwarming write, Aria....

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Aria Ligi 23 November 2017

Thank you so much.

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