Some held a mass at her grave-
Petals strewn on the mild lave.
Granite-rose a gray façade,
Interred within where she strode,
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I sense quite a lot of anger coming from this poem. Was the friend taken away too soon? Congratulation for being poet of the day. Thank you for sharing. And bringing to the light.
Aria, Congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain
Great ink for a departed soul. Emotionally powerful. Congrats for being poem of the day.10++++
This is an emotional portrayal of a dear friend's final parting. Thanks a lot, Dear Aria.
a sad and sorrowful poem about the death of a friend who now is at peace? ............well written Aria
A great tribute to a great soul with poignant and touching words...........deserves P.O.D........congratulation for this great composition..............thanks for sharing
Life and death! ! With sorrowful byes! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Aria, such a brilliant and heartwarming poem worthy of a perfect score of 10. Congrats for being chosen+++
Well penned and exact tribute to someone no more in the earth, liked it, Congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us
A wonderfully written poem speaking on how fragile life can be from a perspective of death. It definitely raises the old saying that death is hardest on the living. Well done!
This is a excellent conveyance of the mixed feelings surrounding death.
An excellent, thought provoking addition to the elegiac tradition!
An excellent, thought provoking new edition to the eiegiac tradition!
A poem reflecting the true spirits of a genuine friendship from hearty friend. Congrats for being the member's PoD.