Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Mourning Comments

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following a dark descending shadow
The light fading from sight
Wollowing in my own selfish pain
I don't care and leave the light behind
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Alex Gomez 19 July 2010

Perhaps you need some grammar/spelling revisions, but otherwise another entrancing piece. Your words are wise for one so young.

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