Saturday, September 5, 2015

Mournful Moment Comments

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Mournful moment does come in a family suddenly,
Mountainous hearts fill with grief very burdenly.
Mind, what does it means and when does it come?
Many relatives cry and many sit hopelessly in mum.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Ramin Ara xSuperb Sir. Thank you for sharing. 8 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xExcellent poetry.....beautiful use of language! 8 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Sneha SK xThis is engaging and vivid. Thank you for sharing. 8 Sep 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xMagnificent views tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo 8 Sep 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xVery impressing poem. You are always attentive, your poem with a glossary. Thank you. 9 Sep 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply

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Lubinda Lubinda 11 October 2015

Death, sad as it may be is part of life, it brings sorrow to so many! Thanks for sharing this piece!

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 September 2015

Grief is part of life; with the muse of death. Nice work and, thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 08 September 2015

Life may suddenly be shadowed by dark clouds! Usually the unexpected death of a loved one fills us with inconsolable sorrow! But in course of time we get the grace to sail over it! We have to somehow accept the inevitability of death! A thoughtful write!

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David Wood 07 September 2015

Those dreadful mournful moments we all experience are truly heart breaking, but time heals a wounded heart. Nice poem.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 06 September 2015

Truly, mournful moments come suddenly and death is inevitable, and God is the greatest, who tests us in the mournful moments.

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Jaishree Nair 06 September 2015

The eternity of soul and the mortality of life well defined. Our time on earth should be spent in doing good.The universal truth - death will reduce all to dust.thanks

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Kelly Kurt 05 September 2015

Another alliterative masterpiece.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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