Tuesday, December 19, 2017

Mounting A Mountain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I always gape
At your giant pyramid peak.
How you got that tall?
Did God
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 30 March 2022

Excellent poem with great imagery.Really Madam we are very small in stature and quality when compared to the structure and magnanimity of mountain.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 January 2021

You are a wonder That people adore. You can reach the star......wonderful poetic expression! A beautiful poem.5 stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 August 2020

Definite a 10+++++and toMyPoemsList, such a Cutest Crystal Clearly composed poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 August 2020

I am impressed by this poem, dated 2017. At that time, I did not know how tom find new poems, how to give new comments and so on, but at present, the world on Poem Hunter is great and very wide for me. A very thought-provoking poem from your golden heart, dear Mrs. Juan Austin. Now I will always find my way on PH, God's Blessings. One of God's creation when He created the Universe. Amazing poem.

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Valsa George 13 April 2020

We often under rate ourselves. But if we look too deep into ourselves, we will find sparks of greatness lying down. They may be like ash covered cinders. If we blow strong enough, they will sparkle in flame. A lovely poem reflecting the curiosity of humans to explore the wonderful mysteries of the universe.

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Valsa George 13 April 2020

I want to explore The mystery in you. I wish to be like you............. Some things and some persons amaze us! We wish to probe into the secret of their greatness. Only one who looks at admirable things with wonder can aspire to be like them.

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Rosie Bourget 05 September 2019

" I wish to be like you. But how can I, I was born of lesser qualities. When I look at you, You always remind me Of how small I am." Based on the challenges or obstacles we face every day, if we till carry on, that means we are as tall as the mountain. Awesome poem Marie

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Egbebi Mariam 22 March 2019

! You are my role model, Keep it up

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 October 2018

You are a wonder That people adore. You can reach the star. Your sky-high beauty Is shouting You conquered the world.......brilliant poetic expression with nice theme. A great write.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 May 2018

Though I will strain All my energies and intellect, And even I will cry For mercy, Under no circumstances, Could I ever Ever conquer you.......touching expression wirh nice theme. A great write.10

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Akhtar Jawad 23 April 2018

Have confidence in you, you have many good qualities and talent, you have a human's imagination that can conquer the skies, what of high mountains. A great poem.

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Robert Murray Smith 21 April 2018

Rose Marie, the mountains erupted from the seas. Majestic they rise overpowring everything below. Another nice nature poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2018

How you got that tall? Did God Blow on you? you towered in isolation and became so great and big and tall........... this sentence touched me. in stillness, in silence, we really grow..... all points come to meditation only in silence........ thank you dear poetess your great imagination. tony

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 January 2018

Such a great comment, Tony. Thank you so much.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2017

“You towered in isolation/Living things in your territory/Succumbed to your greatness/How can I reach you? /I want to explore /The mystery in you”….wonderful imagination! A fascinating poem. I liked it so much..Happy New Year 2018

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 January 2018

Thank you, Dr. Dillip for your great comment. It will always be treasured.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 December 2017

Your sky-high beauty! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2017

Your comment and visit are much appreciated, Edward.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 December 2017

Imagination and the implied comparison as the metaphor is more striking as phrase-making.......outstanding piece excellently scripted........thanks for sharing.....10+++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2017

Your kind words are so much appreciated. Deepak. Thank you for the visit.

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Muzahidul Reza 25 December 2017

I always gape At your giant pyramid peak., ancient Egyptian culture and belief are the result of these pyramids, ............ excellent writing, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 December 2017

Thank you for taking the time to read the poem.Your comment is much appreciated.

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Feipeng Shang 21 December 2017

How you got that tall? Did God Blow on you? - Hope our prayers will be answered...... :)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 December 2017

Thank you for the kind words. I highly appreciate your visit.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 December 2017

Rise Marie, such an inspiring poem...10+++

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