I always gape
At your giant pyramid peak.
How you got that tall?
Did God
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You are a wonder That people adore. You can reach the star......wonderful poetic expression! A beautiful poem.5 stars
Definite a 10+++++and toMyPoemsList, such a Cutest Crystal Clearly composed poem.
I am impressed by this poem, dated 2017. At that time, I did not know how tom find new poems, how to give new comments and so on, but at present, the world on Poem Hunter is great and very wide for me. A very thought-provoking poem from your golden heart, dear Mrs. Juan Austin. Now I will always find my way on PH, God's Blessings. One of God's creation when He created the Universe. Amazing poem.
We often under rate ourselves. But if we look too deep into ourselves, we will find sparks of greatness lying down. They may be like ash covered cinders. If we blow strong enough, they will sparkle in flame. A lovely poem reflecting the curiosity of humans to explore the wonderful mysteries of the universe.
I want to explore The mystery in you. I wish to be like you............. Some things and some persons amaze us! We wish to probe into the secret of their greatness. Only one who looks at admirable things with wonder can aspire to be like them.
" I wish to be like you. But how can I, I was born of lesser qualities. When I look at you, You always remind me Of how small I am." Based on the challenges or obstacles we face every day, if we till carry on, that means we are as tall as the mountain. Awesome poem Marie
You are a wonder That people adore. You can reach the star. Your sky-high beauty Is shouting You conquered the world.......brilliant poetic expression with nice theme. A great write.
Though I will strain All my energies and intellect, And even I will cry For mercy, Under no circumstances, Could I ever Ever conquer you.......touching expression wirh nice theme. A great write.10
Have confidence in you, you have many good qualities and talent, you have a human's imagination that can conquer the skies, what of high mountains. A great poem.
Rose Marie, the mountains erupted from the seas. Majestic they rise overpowring everything below. Another nice nature poem
How you got that tall? Did God Blow on you? you towered in isolation and became so great and big and tall........... this sentence touched me. in stillness, in silence, we really grow..... all points come to meditation only in silence........ thank you dear poetess your great imagination. tony
“You towered in isolation/Living things in your territory/Succumbed to your greatness/How can I reach you? /I want to explore /The mystery in you”….wonderful imagination! A fascinating poem. I liked it so much..Happy New Year 2018
Thank you, Dr. Dillip for your great comment. It will always be treasured.
Your sky-high beauty! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Imagination and the implied comparison as the metaphor is more striking as phrase-making.......outstanding piece excellently scripted........thanks for sharing.....10+++++++++
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I always gape At your giant pyramid peak., ancient Egyptian culture and belief are the result of these pyramids, ............ excellent writing, thanks for sharing the poem with us
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How you got that tall? Did God Blow on you? - Hope our prayers will be answered...... :)
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Excellent poem with great imagery.Really Madam we are very small in stature and quality when compared to the structure and magnanimity of mountain.