Saturday, August 2, 2008

! ! Mountains And My Dawn! Comments

Rating: 3.3

Mountains call me from mystic terrains
a prayer comes from divine heart
wild flowers fall on discreet dreams
dews on garden flowers
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Mamta Agarwal 13 August 2008

a lovely mystical poem, full of imagery.10 Mamta

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Indira Renganathan 08 August 2008

Emotions and nature..you are an expert.Good write 10

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Raj Nandy 08 August 2008

A beautiful piece of creative poetry - straight out of the workshop of your creative mind! -Raj Nandy

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Emancipation Planz 02 August 2008

Rema, I know where you went for this one... and...YoU... delivered... I wonderful climb to your sun rising.. aroha xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 02 August 2008

You are a stellar imagist, Rema....and your inveterating passion for the pictorial write, is both compelling, and everpresent, in this piece....Imagery to a Writer(like myself) , but more especially to a bonifide Poet(such as yourself) is as paramount, and capturing, as illusion to a master magician.Solid work, indeed! ~ FjR ~ ..08-08..

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