Mountain's Grief Comments

very nice and symbolic poem. thanks for sharing. i enjoyed. your use of words wereexcellent.

Shamik, lovely theme & perfect symbolism. Apt use of each words imparts the deep feeling behind it and the flow of it. Just loved it.

You have really poured your heart into this poem Shamik and you have written with symbolism and beautiful imagery. Well done! 10 love Karin

Streams and Tremors…incessant tears betwixt intermittent bouts of grief...yes the Mountain grieving...standing 'high' it is able to look upon all those autocracies down its planes... I liked the theme there...the way a mountain and the Creator’s grief is juxtaposed...the Mountain there is symbolic to God...intelligent insightful write...10

This is a good composition, thing that must be count on, nice..

This is a nice poem. It gives you something to think about.