Monday, May 25, 2009

Mountain Of Raw Emotions Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm climbing,
Trying to get to the top of this monsterous mountian.
But I can't.
For this mountain
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Heart of Ice Die Die Die
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Patrick A. Martin 10 September 2009

It is only in the climbing that we reach new heights and that's what you're doing my friend REACHING NEW HEIGHTS.10

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Ted M 19 August 2009

Brilliant, comparing your feelings to that of climbing a difficult mountain. Nice poetry..........10

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Mystic Indian 10 August 2009

a brilliant, deep conversation with the self 10/10

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BEAU GOLDEN 23 July 2009

Persistent loneliness is a theme in many writers works. The optimism at the end works great! Don't let the emptiness devour.. I reallly enjoyed this, adding it to my poem list. Beau

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