I'm climbing,
Trying to get to the top of this monsterous mountian.
But I can't.
For this mountain
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Brilliant, comparing your feelings to that of climbing a difficult mountain. Nice poetry..........10
Persistent loneliness is a theme in many writers works. The optimism at the end works great! Don't let the emptiness devour.. I reallly enjoyed this, adding it to my poem list. Beau
It is only in the climbing that we reach new heights and that's what you're doing my friend REACHING NEW HEIGHTS.10