Mountain Man. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Mountain Man.

Rating: 5.0


My Brother had a masters plan.
Living in a cabin, off the land.
Like Grizzly Adams...Not
Knowing for sure what he seeked,
but, he hope a bear wouldn't
peek. If he had to take a leak.
But, As Kind As He Could Be...He
tried to live so Peacefully, Amongst
the Beauty. Him and a donkey. Thirty some Years or More...His
Heart went off to explore. Catching
fish off the shore. Hauling logs
pedals slammed to the floor. He wasn't
ever bored. But, he never found what
he was looking for. Till His Heart
Brought Him Back To His Fathers Door! ! !



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Mountain Man.
Friday, March 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,family,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 08 March 2017

What a kind story about your brother's journey and his homecoming. Mountain Man had an adventure but he made his way home and his sister's love watched with eager eyes as he reunited with his Father.. 10++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 15 March 2017

Thank You! ! ! Susan, For Such A kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poems Touch All Hearts That Pass By! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 March 2017

As kind as he could be! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rebecca Navarre 15 March 2017

Thank You! ! ! Edward, For Being So Kind! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is So Beautifully And Wonderfully Done! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 March 2017

Oh Becca, I loved this one. Not Knowing for sure what he seeked, Nobody knows what one is seeking...A lovely 10 for this one.

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Rebecca Navarre 15 March 2017

Thank You! ! ! Unnikrishnan, For Being So Kind! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Flows So Beautifully Strong! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again For Being So Thoughtful! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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