Thursday, May 17, 2007

Mountain Knight Comments

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He stood tall in shining armor..
But did he know what he was for..
He held his sword with fierce..
And the enemies down, he pierce.
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Dan Jensen
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It sounds like your knight developed a conscience and realised there was more to life than battles.The biggest battle was won within his soul.Nice poem.

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Derrick Clark 17 May 2007

this is a very nice poem, keep it up.

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