Monday, November 21, 2005

Mountain Heart Comments

Rating: 2.8

Minute fissures spider across granite ridges;
add character to cold stone:
fine lines proliferate on mountain's face.
Tiny crevices glisten green with lichen:
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Hugh Cobb
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Ben Gieske 18 July 2007

I like all the vivid and sharp images, the choice of words, and the way you weave your main thought throughout the poem. Fascinating and delightful. I could feel the hardness and the cold.

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Hugh Cobb

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