Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Mountain Comments

Rating: 5.0

High so, touching the sky
clouds playing in lap
with enormous electricity
like a hump with reeds
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ramesh rai
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Poetheart Morgan 24 July 2013

there in the heights the wind will blow my ashes I will rest where i always lived.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 July 2013

Be like mountain. Beautiful. Thank you.

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R.j. Wynn 24 July 2013

Yes sir. A mountain of a man. Who is he.

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Dave Walker 24 July 2013

A great poem, the mountains can tell us all about nature.

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Walterrean Salley 24 July 2013

Very interesting and informative. New insight concerning an object one might have known little or nothing of. Thank you.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 23 July 2013

salute to mountains, from where the soil itself has come to be.

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Shahzia Batool 23 July 2013

the special thing about this poem is the composition of phrases and manipulation of images...a great symbol for a high head in many situations of human life!

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