Sunday, November 30, 2008

Mound, Mount, Open Pasture Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rain, wind
Sun, moon, starry sky
Difficult to understanding
With its young deer and maned wolf running through
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UMBELINA FROTA Linhares Pimenta Bastos
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It gives me a window to your world.Very descriptive! ! ! ! ! ! A ten from me.if you get a chance please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKU.Comments and ratings are welcomed.

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Reshma Ramesh 18 December 2008

this is beautiful...............keep writing

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*Trusting You* 01 December 2008

I love the end... Crying out, pressing In the chest the homesickness oh yes even though the tuff ones dont wanna admit to it, being away takes its toll on the body and the mind this was very interesting to read. good job. Crystal

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