Riding through imaginary valleys of esoteric thought,
She flagged me down on Dharma Avenue
With her long hair blown back by the pleasant breeze of philosophy.
We were twin souls occupying a dream womb
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An eloquent write, Uriah, digging deep and touching so many chords. This is a poem both complex (allusions) and simple (love) - so much to ponder. The spiralling out of the ending from the narrative is stunning, though the message was foreshadowed. - Will
This is a real gem Uriah. You turn a phrase like few poets ever could. A remarkable poem this is.
Fascinating imagery. A touch of Bob Dylan. At least to my way of thinking. To be in a world where everyone is kind...a solace thought indeed. Exceptional. Ten, of course. Always your friend, Sandra