Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Motor Scooter Comments

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He was enjoying a nice day.
When a terrible storm suddenly came his way.
He would have been okay.
But he was riding his motor scooter on the highway.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2018

But he was riding his motor scooter on the highway. He got drenched by the rain and was very wet...nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem nicely executed.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 31 October 2018

Got drenched on the highway, interesting and enjoyable.

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Practicing Poetess 31 October 2018

Should've worn a wet suit or raincoat, or checked the weather forecast before leaving the house! Enjoyed this poem.

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