Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, April 3, 2014

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End of long summer gives respite
The heat has taken heavy toll with no delight
The medium or heavy showers make it all
Children and elders come out with cheerful call
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 April 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 8 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

nice Rebecca - Becky Tecson23 minutes ago very artiscally expressed thank God for weekends huh Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

Nice Mallika Dhar24 minutes ago Good Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

Has good points but bad grammar. Josh Byrd19 minutes ago I think he is making valid points about life. Needs to work on grammar a bit though I think.

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Kevin Patrick 03 April 2014

I like the message of this, its within us to change ourselves for the better, we should be able to relax a rightful mind leads to rightful peace, thank you this is a lovely work. Great philosophy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

End of long summer gives respite The heat has taken heavy toll with no delight

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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