End of long summer gives respite
The heat has taken heavy toll with no delight
The medium or heavy showers make it all
Children and elders come out with cheerful call
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nice Rebecca - Becky Tecson23 minutes ago very artiscally expressed thank God for weekends huh Comment +1
Has good points but bad grammar. Josh Byrd19 minutes ago I think he is making valid points about life. Needs to work on grammar a bit though I think.
I like the message of this, its within us to change ourselves for the better, we should be able to relax a rightful mind leads to rightful peace, thank you this is a lovely work. Great philosophy
End of long summer gives respite The heat has taken heavy toll with no delight
Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 8 hrs · Unlike · 1