Saturday, November 16, 2013

Motivationless Comments

Rating: 3.8

I just wanna lay in someones arms all night and let them hold me,
not go home to a house of hate and parents who scold me.
But I throw away the best of things,
forget the most important peoples names-
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Melissa Robinson
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Khairul Ahsan 23 February 2014

This is a poem of pain and sadness. 'I hide behind the cut out scenes devoured by a mask of shame.' - This is very painful, depressive. 'rows of people will watch and their criticism may never stop, so live like no ones watching and it may help u out alot.' - You can silence the criticism by performing a good show. 'but just think that one day u won't be able to sleep because ur to busy having life bring u better things.' - Very encouraging. 'life is what u make it, just be who u wanna be.' - Absolutely right!

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Melissa Robinson 31 December 2013

You are very welcome, it cuts deep into my thoughts, this poem does.

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Ocklawaha Holt 21 December 2013

heres to you mrs. robinson: (song reference) , this is a great poem as i read it i felt it was expressing the truths of the world, thank you for that!

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