Broad sweep of branches, how they dip and swirl.
Contrasting trees, in unison they whirl.
Waves passing through these naked stalwart boughs,
The gale with all its wiles, fair sighs and soughs.
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an apt comparison, and a lovely image to nourish us during this barren section of winter. - chuck
Lovely comparison, Ernestine. The currents of creativity are certainly flowing through your pen. Danny
I could see what you were saying, and I enjoyed what I saw You're a marvel on this site Ernestine Love duncan X
The rhythm of the words moved in mind like the wind. Enjoyed the feeling of your poetry Ernestine Many thanks David
A lovely title and an equally captivating poem. Love, Andrew x