Thursday, March 2, 2017

Moths Comments

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In this land of perennial mists
That cast a shroud over all forms
Plunging them in the languid torpor
Of a long wintry dream,
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Rod M.Peters
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Bri Edwards 10 June 2017

no comments so far! ? i guess i'll have to read it now and comment. shoot! do i have the time? ? ==================== But we chose to sail through the thinner air, ............chose (past tense i believe) or choose (present tense i believe? i used to make a mistake with these two. not sure which you want. thongs...........i didn't know moths wore underwear my time is up! ; ( i hope i never run into a mad god Dragging the shackles of his solitude. bri :)

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Rod Mendieta 12 June 2017

Yes, this one a bit over the top so I’m not surprised it took a seasoned critic like you to even attempt to comment! Sure appreciate your hardiness, going, as Captain Kirk, where no man dared to go before! And, by way of clarification, yes, I meant “chose” in past tense and “thongs” as bindings.

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