She leaves
For another day of
Sharpened claws,
Twisted by opinion,
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This is clearly the voice of experience speaking, here. I hope all turns out well. There is too much of this. great poem. Jon
This poem is spoken from the heart and leaves the reader with some powerful images.
very engaging and powerful. Thanks for your comments, too, Lucy.
We have all felt this at times, when your offspring are out in the big wide world. It's not a pleasant time at all. Sincerely Ernestine. You've captured it well.
Very intense.........I really enjoyed this one Lucy. Sincerely, Mary
Mothers Prayer Against the Bullies-All mothers facing these tortures would bless Lucy for having brought out their feelings open in this poem