Monday, November 7, 2005

Mothers Prayer Against The Bullies Comments

Rating: 5.0

She leaves
For another day of
Sharpened claws,
Twisted by opinion,
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Lucy Burrow
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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 November 2005

Mothers Prayer Against the Bullies-All mothers facing these tortures would bless Lucy for having brought out their feelings open in this poem

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Jon Lloyd 16 November 2005

This is clearly the voice of experience speaking, here. I hope all turns out well. There is too much of this. great poem. Jon

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Simon Whild 11 November 2005

This poem is spoken from the heart and leaves the reader with some powerful images.

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Marcy Jarvis 10 November 2005

very engaging and powerful. Thanks for your comments, too, Lucy.

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Ernestine Northover 08 November 2005

We have all felt this at times, when your offspring are out in the big wide world. It's not a pleasant time at all. Sincerely Ernestine. You've captured it well.

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Mary Nagy 07 November 2005

Very intense.........I really enjoyed this one Lucy. Sincerely, Mary

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Lucy Burrow

Lucy Burrow

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