Sunday, March 25, 2018

Mothers Prayer Comments

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She was the one who opened my life's door,
She used to entertain me when I would be feeling bored,
She took care of all my choices,
But in return, I used to disturb her sleeps by making harsh noises.
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Aryan Nuwal
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Jayani 04 May 2018

Very inspiring poems aryan. Loved your poems. Keep up the hard and good work . Your classmate

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Bhavya Bengani 03 May 2018

Very nice Aryan

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Khushboo 27 April 2018

Great job really heart touching and yes the greatest gift from God is a mom.....

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Aditya agarwal 20 April 2018

Very nice poem Aryan , Aditya Agarwal this side

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TARANG CHHABRA 20 April 2018

AMAZING ARYAN....YOUR SCHOOL MATE TARANG HERE....

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Gagandeep Kaur 08 April 2018

Very good poem Aryan.. proud of you

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Reema 08 April 2018

It was so lovely poem

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Ruchi 07 April 2018

It was a great attempt Aryan but try hard

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Nirmala 07 April 2018

Sweet thoughts, lovely

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2018

My cries her pain, from her everything I gained. lovely childhood memories that affect a whole human life and cherishing her love beyond words. thank u dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 April 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Aryan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 25 March 2018

Beautiful tribute to mothers ceremoniously rich in tone. An absolutely pleasing poem, well articulated and nicely penned from heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Aryan and do remain enriched.

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Aryan Nuwal 06 April 2018

Thank you very much for understanding the efforts of mom

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Aryan Nuwal 06 April 2018

thank u very much for understanding efforts of mom

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