Saturday, February 20, 2010

Mothers And Sons Comments

Rating: 4.0

Charley was picked up on 1st
He was drunk and had fallen.
At the time it seemed like
Too much trouble to get up again
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Allan Thorne
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 27 October 2015

It is a nice poem, but I wanted more at the end.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 27 October 2015

It is a nice story, a great poem, but I do not like the ending. I expected a bigger surprise, a little shock, or a little laughter.

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Allan Thorne

Allan Thorne

Bellows Falls VT
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