Saturday, July 21, 2018

Motherly Disposition Comments

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Drawing from inner soul, high and wide, she grows
up in to heavens, outspreading branches and twigs
Effecting from ecstatic communication with divines
yields buds flowers and fruits, in mundaneadolescence
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 August 2018

very beautiful Mothers poetry you have posted I wish you could also read two of mine MOMS SMILES AND MOTHER'S DAY TODAY BOTH LIKE YOU MAY AND Kindly translate into CEYLONESE LANGUAGE IF YOU FEEL comfortable o great poet of SRI LANKA

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 02 August 2018

Thank you for the comment. Most certainly I'll give a try and come back to you.

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Valsa George 01 August 2018

The tree has a motherly disposition! Growing tall with leaves and flowers, she is a delight to the eyes and and a source of shade over heads! She also entertains bees, butterflies and birds like a loving mother, discerning their needs and wishes. A lovely poem with a lovelier image!

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 02 August 2018

You are my inspiration, Valsa. Thank you for your insightful comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2018

Part - 2 Watching in heartfelt delight, she beholds bees, butterflies, birds on fluttering wings She, being aware 'o their need, wouldn't mind for, they are a part of herself, she's convinced. Marvelous one. Thanks for sharing.10

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 02 August 2018

Thank you Kumarfor you generous comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2018

Part -1 It is so beautifully depicted on mother earth having a beautiful title 'Motherly Disposition'. The inscription is so touching and interesting. Primeval love of earth to the sky is still alive. I quote....... Mother earth in her primeval love to the sky above Approves, the conjuncture of universal esteem

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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