No one to rear
No one to reprimand
No one there -
My attention to demand.
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a beautiful write. i dont think there is any substitute of mother. if it happens he/she is praiseworthy.
a nice depiction of the pain and sorrows a mother has to bear silently for no fault of her ........ oh, sorry sorry for containing the child - for feeding the breast - for caring -for blessing -for being a mother.................................. for so many crimes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Motherhood has been - A roller- coaster ride Had its pitfalls The icing on the cake too. amazing lines and universal too! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
A great poetic tribute on motherhood.thank you for sharing.jk
Motherhood is definitely A roller - coaster ride. Both pitfall and icing on cake too... Enjoying each moment is definitely wonderful..There is nothing like it..Beautiful way you have portrayed. Loved reading it.
A sublime start with a nice poem, Onku. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.