Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, June 3, 2012

Mother To Hold Comments

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I drew her near and kissed
She was so much near yet missed
She was, in fact, eye ball for my existence
I may sometimes go mad if not see her by chance
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Neela Nath Das 07 June 2012

Very nice expression.I liked it.

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Muzzammil Shah Very nice lines presenting mother in such great tone and rhyme that is quite praiseworthy. I love it. 7 hours ago · Like · 1

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abbylovesm This is excellent, and well-written. Keep it up!

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I drew her near and kissed She was so much near yet missed She was, in fact, eye ball for my existence I may sometimes go mad if not see her by chance

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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