Mother To Hold Comments

Very nice expression.I liked it.

Muzzammil Shah Very nice lines presenting mother in such great tone and rhyme that is quite praiseworthy. I love it. 7 hours ago · Like · 1

abbylovesm This is excellent, and well-written. Keep it up!

I drew her near and kissed She was so much near yet missed She was, in fact, eye ball for my existence I may sometimes go mad if not see her by chance