I drew her near and kissed
She was so much near yet missed
She was, in fact, eye ball for my existence
I may sometimes go mad if not see her by chance
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Muzzammil Shah Very nice lines presenting mother in such great tone and rhyme that is quite praiseworthy. I love it. 7 hours ago · Like · 1
abbylovesm This is excellent, and well-written. Keep it up!
I drew her near and kissed She was so much near yet missed She was, in fact, eye ball for my existence I may sometimes go mad if not see her by chance
Very nice expression.I liked it.