** Mother To Be ** Comments

nice tender poem about a mother to be well written and exudes the confidence of creation.... blessings sat

very good poem...i sure every mother go to heaven.

this is really the best of your poems.very nice one in a good rhyme.thank you for this great poem.

I'm speechless Mehraneh.Great job!

Sense of maternity and motherhood with high pulse of kindness especially in our country with good background culture

Great poem Mehraneh, 10/10 from me. keep up the great work :)

Just beautiful. Mothers deserve the best. All the best things in the world, if we give, won't make up for a moment of a mother's devoted attention to her child. Well done.

Krasivayi! Guezelim! Sehr schoen! Beautiful! Bella! La Jawab! Khoobsurat! Darun! of persian i think it is Behetarin though i am not sure but its close in vocabulary with indian hindi or pakistani urdu...the first stanza is satirical religious significance which demands th attraction of readers further on.The first stanza is like a Taqwa....one may well dislike its material reality of natural losses and gaining over another`s conditions but the lucid style has unravelled the mysteries what Islam has always overlooked beyond the concepts of islamisation and hard life of women in men`s defined social dos and donts and prejudices in Iran.Coming to the second stanza it delineates beautifully with the painstaking definition of how much courage it requires to be a mother in terms of sacrifices against materialism what women most of the time finds easy than men with men in enjoying plutocracy the wrong way or right or the mixed way.The last stanza is an analysis and signifies the contribution of motherhood to mankind and the aptitude of the poet to justify in the end saying the prototype to symbolize maternity and motherhood and therefore motherliness.Overall an enjoyable poetic theme again well rhymed and bodied, very precise and less time consuming for the lazy readers and hats off to all mothers who has a voice in your mouthpiece.Hallmarks

Excellent.. .splendid.

Wow thats a good poem. Wow im wordless its amaizing

flow, wording and rhyme is beautiful.nice poem.liked it.

Being a mother is the best thing you have ever felt. This idea has been supported well in a nice verse with fine rhygmn. Mother is really a symbol of sacrifice!

That's why we have always heard Being a mother is the best thing you have ever felt... to be mother is nothing like others.. feel divine and no one can undermine.. i loved it....10 welcome

Really nice! reminds me of the time when my mum was going to have my little sister: D lol

'tis a wonderful poem/so fresh and elegant...10

Grin. Enjoyed it. Good story with a nice beat.

Mehraneh - good, very heartly ... 10... Tsira

They say you will go to heaven If you have a bun in the oven After passing one and seven thats fresh and nice :) ...cheers