</>Mother told me
I hold you in cool
even i am hot
I hold you in light
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my dear darling baby.... inal the difficulties mother still addreses as dear. this is beauty and total dedication and love for child.... i like it...10 love papa series called... papa do u know and papa u too?
veru touching natural acts of a mother to a child, haiku theme is good but not the structure should be Five Seven Five thank you for your comments about my poems, keep in touch
a lovely poem, very touching.God couldn't be every where so he made mothers. its honest, straight from your heart.10 Mamta
mother is the eye the heart the feel of the world around for babies...good write Vinod...10
I especially liked the second half of this poem because it reminded me of the way my mother taught me to appreciate the beauty of nature. She was always pointing things out - flowers, birds, trees and so on. Best wishes, Robert.
A mother a deputy of the God Is really a benediction on the world of clod. Good Work.
WHAT A REALLY BEATTIFUL POEM i WISH MY MOTHER WAS ALIVE TO ENJOY IT JIM
What a touching example of a mothers love for her child...thank you for sharing this....
The gift of a mother is her unconditional love. Naughty or good her baby is her darling. A poignant poem of love and remembrance. Warm regards, Sandra