Monday, March 21, 2005

Mother's Day Short Poem Comments

Rating: 3.3

Wave after wave
crushes over my legs
i remember mom's every word
to help me stand
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john tiong chunghoo
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Raynette Eitel 31 May 2005

This is just beautiful, John. It is what a poem should be...an image with no extraneous words getting in the way of a strong message. I'm putting it in my favorite things and will send it to my daughters, if you don't mind. Raynette

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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