Saturday, October 11, 2008

Mother Of Two Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is a mother of two
She irrigated their life
With her blood, it is true.
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jyoti saxena
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Reetessh Sabrr 28 August 2009

Oh di...wata warm and emotional write...full of a divine experience of the mother in you and every other.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 13 May 2009

Beautifully done! I love all mothers and future moms.

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ata khan 16 April 2009

I wish my mother was alive today, even sick on bed. So i could kiss her feet every dawn and dusk. All my trophies and medals, all my success in life, seem so worthless without her. A beautiful write, an eye opener Jyoti 10++++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 October 2008

This is very beautiful ode to mother. The first part seemed like my poem HUMANS ARE LIKE THIS. But ended positively...........10

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Deepti Agarwal 14 October 2008

It seems as if in this materialistic world every mother sees the same fate. Mothers are always mothers... only the kids try to out grow her in every respect leaving behind all alone n wondering.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 October 2008

Very nice composition with nice imagery. 10+

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