Friday, November 18, 2016

Mother Of Silence Comments

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I'm the mother bird, sitting guard
To my sleeping little squab of silence.
Outside, the reverberation of the marching army
Of cyclones, gale and barrage.
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Bisy Untan
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Valsa George 04 March 2019

We all like silence very often, but not always! Unfortunately there is so much cacophony around! Somehow we have to put up with this at the thought that finally we will be wafted into a world of peacefulness! Quite meaningful!

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Prabir Gayen 22 January 2019

Very beautiful poem... thanks.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 November 2017

An amazing poem.. The ending is absolutely immaculate . 10

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Randhir Kaur 23 November 2016

Beautiful write Mam. Silence is needed but not much as you said... Well explained.

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Bisy Untan 23 November 2016

My communion with God is in perfect silence and it helps me very much to keep a peaceful mentality. My age may be the reason. Thanks for sharing your juvenile thought. May God bless you! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 November 2016

No disburbance! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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