Mother Ocean Comments

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one Andre. 'Slide deeply into my bones' is a wonderful opening sentence and the final stanza is exceptional - The sky is like a spy, always gazing back at you. but the ocean is like a melody when breaking on the shore at dawn, every inch of his freshness wakes up your soul. You have a true poet's ear and a gift for seeing the world which is most impressive. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥