Sunday, March 22, 2015

Mother Nature's Moodswings Comments

Rating: 4.2

Nature smiles in Spring
Pulls at our heart string
as greenery's hued in greener tinge
Having had an everlasting effect
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Cowboy Ron Williams 15 December 2021

Amazing nature poem! Thank you!

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Chinedu Dike 04 March 2020

Very insightful and compelling reflection on Nature, a work of an intricate mind.

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Rebecca Navarre 18 September 2018

Ever so beautifully woven, as we feel with such heart the words spoken! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Bill Cantrell 09 September 2017

Well, I'm glad you use your free will to write such beautiful poetry! Oh! Beware her icy glare.....watch out! She could get real stormy.....I really love the way these types of lines shout out suddenly at the reader, your poetry is indeed refreshing and charming! ! !

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Chan Mongol 29 October 2016

This is my kind of poem. The poet has a skilled brain to well construct her poem. For me, it is not a poem if I don't find rhythm and rhymes in a poem. I will rate the poem to #10. The poet put her heart to describe the nature. By the way, I will request the poet to read my (1) Autumn and winter + (2) Love to life. _____Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 02 March 2016

You have succinctly portrayed various moods of nature in a remarkable style spiced with idioms to cheer up the mood of the reader. Thanks.

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Marilyn Lott 04 August 2015

I love Mother Nature and all of her seasons. Thank you so much for your view of them with wonderful colors and textures. All of the senses come alive.

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Jitesh Shah 13 April 2015

a wonderful, very nice i like it and also read my poem

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Amitava Sur 07 April 2015

Prudent writing where you detailed the different facets of mother nature and you painted it so nicely.I loved reading it.

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Victoria Foister 07 April 2015

really good poem! ! All the four seasons are captured beautifully without being tedious! Nature's comparison to a mother's mood swings

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Paul Sebastian 07 April 2015

Clever poetic painting of words! Great perception of the four seasons, personifying mother nature. Your rhyming verses and word-skill is greatly admired. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.

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Kevin Patrick 06 April 2015

Great wordplay hear, quite a rip roaring adventure into the many faces of mother nature, its very lush and gallivant, you do an amazing job of playing with words using metaphors I especially like this part in summer, nature boils and goes into a 'heated debate' Cracking stuff, I love when someone is able to write a distinctive work about the seasons, and this is distinctive, well done!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 April 2015

Nature flows in Autumn and yet the point here Nature mother nurtures all with love and care. Wonderful poem shared really.

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Kelly Kurt 02 April 2015

A wonderful, vibrant poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 31 March 2015

Nature's moods captured perfectly in this wonderful poem.

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Matthew Holloway 28 March 2015

A colourful pallet of poetry

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Valsa George 24 March 2015

This is an amazing write Zaynub! All the four seasons are captured beautifully without being tedious! Nature's comparison to a mother's mood swings is quite apt! Enjoyed your 'seasoned seasonal pun' and had much fun! Top marks! I invite you to read my poem on Winter...my latest post! If possible, my other poems... Spring, Summer and Autumn!

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Stephen Katona 23 March 2015

A lovely description of the many faces of mother nature.

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Dave Walker 23 March 2015

Mother nature is one of the things that we can all enjoy, a great poem.

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Lyn Paul 23 March 2015

Such a beautiful description of Mother nature and I loved your light humour. Have a sun shiny day.

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