Thursday, December 13, 2007

Mother Nature’s Ice Show Comments

Rating: 4.3

If you go outside my friend
You’ll take your life in your hands
For if you slip and fall on ice
It will hurt so much when you land
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Marilyn Lott
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Ernestine Northover 13 December 2007

We have very frosty mornings here now, and some of the wet patches on the pavements are frozen. You have captured the feeling very well in this poem. It is so easy to tumble, just by putting a foot wrong and Ooopps a daisy - down you go. Enjoyed the read very much. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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David Taylor 13 December 2007

A slippery and cold subject with a warm touch! Love from David

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