Sunday, September 23, 2018

Mother More Than A Hunter Comments

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From freedom of forest to four walls sent,
Leaving her pride and young cubs she had come,
The beast of prey to city zoo was lent,
She was a mother, now mothered by some.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 September 2018

A magnificent piece of poetry! Liked the first stanza most! Thanks for sharing....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 September 2018

Thank you Dr Swain, the word 'mother' always evokes such deeply felt sentiment. Good to know you liked the poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2018

Life begins to get virtue to feel peace and bliss. We wonder regarding her fair freedom. Truth seeks always peace. In loneliness sometimes a person feels peace and sometimes he tries to find destiny. An interesting poem on Mother topic is well penned with respect to epic story...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 September 2018

Thank you Mr kumarmani, you liked my poem. A chick finding more safety in a lion enclosure is tribute to a mother, but an ill commentary otherwise

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Godhra - Gujarat
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