Saturday, November 25, 2006

Mother Moon Comments

Rating: 4.5

the moon is a mother,
tucking her children into bed,
her hair of stars sways gently,
as she looks down,
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Jess Terry
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Stug Jordan 04 April 2007

This has a lovely cadence to it. Well done for writing so well, with that symbolic touch, about something taken for granted. S x

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