Tuesday, October 29, 2019

Mother Maya Comments

Rating: 5.0

She gave more and more toys to her cry-child,
Not a look and she wailed ever more still,
Restless, disconsolate, wanton, and wild,
But, as mothers do, she knew what was ill.
...
Read full text

Aniruddha Pathak
COMMENTS
Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2019

Mother taking care of her child/children. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 29 October 2019

Thanks for visiting this poem dear EKL

0 0
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2019

The love of mother to her child is immeasurable and invaluable. She can do as per child's need for this love. You have brought out a marvelous poem on child and mother with their activities, jeering and playing. Nice penmanship. Thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 29 October 2019

You're right in your analysis. Thanks for visiting with such encouraging feedback dear KM.

0 0
Dr Dillip K Swain 29 October 2019

She piles in people's paths pageants of toys/Hoping that we be wise and virtuous/That, we ferret out jeers faking as joys/Her love, illusion-clad, is what we see....brilliantly expressed sir! A beautiful poem.....10

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 29 October 2019

Thanks for visiting this poem Dr Swain and liking it

0 0
Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
Close
Error Success