Mother Ma’land Comments
years back......a bird stood shuddering on the tarmac with discontent deep in its bowels, as the grey haired captain eased up the throttle....the bird roared sprang to life and took wing....as i looked out the window at the receding landscape....i came up with a few lines
heres to motherland...wherever that maybe
(Jeddah..1992)
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an amazing poetry.............very well depicting mother's love n their basic natuealso theirunconditional love.......... i love the rhyming scheme of the poem............well expressed feelings 10++++++++
A lot of thought started by the sight of a little bird...well written, liked the flow...an ode to nature
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7/30/2025 12:37:58 AM # 1.0.0
As walking through vast desert and ending on an oasis..........rich in alliteration. a sonorous composition