Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Mother Loves Me (Remix) Comments

Rating: 2.5

Mother Loves Me
I wanted to be like you. Always have and always will.
Wished you were always here. Wished I could always be there.
I tried I really did. I tried to get you to love me.
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Kelsea Osterman
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K. Bianca 16 February 2010

A really touching poem... The frustration, the annoyance, the yearning for attention all mingled together, giving voice to a desperate daughter. I love the last line, 'I'll do everything that you never did for me'.

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