Monday, April 13, 2009

Mother Likes To Sing! Comments

Rating: 4.5

As a child, I was often asked
why do I block my ears,
with cotton wool and ear plugs?
but I pretended not to hear...
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Tracey TEE
COMMENTS
Stephen Magill 17 September 2009

really well written, amazing how you made the humour comes out in the words and rythm. steve

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 24 April 2009

beautiful tribute to your mom, lovely song 10

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Stephen Stirk 14 April 2009

'You've hidden all the mirrors and protected all your ears'. I take it then, that all the windows in the house are smashed. Love the comedy style. The best part of comedy, I feel, is its diversity. This is a nice comical and unusual piece. Get a sound booth fitted Tee Hee Steve 11.375 out of ten

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Mark R Slaughter 14 April 2009

I know what you mean - my wife, kids, and the cat had to put up with my singing. All part of family life! Nice piece Tracy. Mark

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 13 April 2009

a moving poem to a mother.. i love how u portrayed her.. so loving.. u amazing

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