Mother Is Dying: Part 1 (Cancerous Children) Comments

WOW.. Very poignant piece. Loved it Wow.

My dear mother has nurtured me For my entire existence, Providing me with the necessities For survival.... mother is mothr can't becompared with any figure.. good write and i appriciate the efforts... very good write...10 read mine o, mother, papa do u knopw and papa u too

this was a very sad piece. It is hard to watch a parent suffer by the hands of their own children. Not a very good way of life. Very well written and flowed well. Great job.

dayum, this is deep man 10*